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:CM: Nicki THB SA style

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Comission SA logo no background ask for :iconkasie-the-lion:

i hope you like


character(c):iconkasie-the-lion:

Art (c) :iconferni21: mw
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Sonic Adventure style itself is incredibly, INCREDIBLY difficult to pull off. The lineart takes hours to do, and sometimes it's even a pain as you ask yourself, 'Is the wait really worth it?'

For this deviation, I would definetly say 'possibly.'

The character's porportions are very good. I would reccomend to make the body just a tad smaller, because the official Sonic style is measured in head lengths. And I truly believe that if one were to draw Sonic Adventure style, they would want it to look as official as possible.

Her leg sticking out from behind her looks broken. I mean, try it yourself. It hurts, doesn't it? And from the expression on her face she doesn't seem like she were in pain, so I would next time recommend paying a bit more attention to leg movements.

Her hands are next. Hands can be difficult too, and like the legs, I would have probably used a reference. The fingers are too long and and the palm of her hand is too square. The fingers themselves are also quite a bug; they look like very pointy, a bit too pointy, if you know what I mean.

From the viewer's point, the right eye is noticibly larger than the left eye.

The lineart could be improved in many ways. On the leg behind her, the strip of paint is overlapping the the strap. By her fringe too, the top part is overlapping the bottom quill.

Last but not least, coloring. The coloring is done quite neat, but it hasn't made me scream 'Wow! This looks official!' The highlights you chose for the bangs and hair are too white. Too white. The first quill on the viewer's side is also sticking out funny, making the coloring look misguiding.

That is all.